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Post by Silverpelt on Dec 16, 2007 18:56:01 GMT -5
"What?" Grasskit asked not understanding what her sister was saying.
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Post by Autumnpool on Dec 16, 2007 19:07:25 GMT -5
Poppykit put down the ball of moss. 'Let's go back to the nursery before mom finds out," she mewed, spitting out pieces of moss. Then she picked up the moss and started back to the camp, glancing back every couple of times to see if her sisters were following.
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Post by Goldenstar on Dec 17, 2007 18:55:09 GMT -5
OOC:// Are the rogues actually gonna steal the kits or are we going to stay out here until someone gives the word?
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Post by Torrentstar on Dec 17, 2007 20:57:05 GMT -5
OOC;; I think the rogues should steal the kits soon. By the way, when do they 'attack'?
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Post by Torrentstar on Dec 17, 2007 20:57:23 GMT -5
OOC;; And which camp will be attacked first?
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Post by Goldenstar on Dec 18, 2007 10:07:14 GMT -5
OOC:// I'm totally confused. Let's make a thread about it in the General board so we can narrow everything down to a point and then follow along. I thought they were going to attack CloudClan first, then for some reason go over to EmberClan, then.... Except how are they goig to steal the kits here if they're already fighting? I thought they were going to come here only after the battle had started - not a kit-raid battle but the real and final thing.
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Post by Darkkit on Dec 18, 2007 16:20:36 GMT -5
hi want to come on a hunting patrol we need more freshkill in the pile amberpaw said flicking her tail nervously I mean only if you want to she said backing away with her tail fluffed up as if shed seen a cat from starclan
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Post by Torrentstar on Dec 18, 2007 16:33:08 GMT -5
OOC;; Amberkit, can you use quotes when somebody's talking and proper spelling/grammar/capitalization?
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Post by Goldenstar on Dec 18, 2007 17:47:34 GMT -5
And punctuation. If you do as she says, your above post would look like this -
"Hi, want to come on a hunting patrol? We need more fresh-kill in the pile." Amberpaw said, flicking her tail nervously. "I mean, only if you want to..." she said, backing away with her tail fluffed up as if she'd seen a cat from StarClan.
Isn't that easier to read?
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Post by Darkkit on Dec 18, 2007 20:07:01 GMT -5
cool
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Post by Torrentstar on Dec 18, 2007 20:08:32 GMT -5
OOC;; And some form of ooc when out of character too. Why don't you read the rules?
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Post by Autumnpool on Dec 20, 2007 19:08:57 GMT -5
OOC://Umm.. I think the kits should be stolen while they are returning from collecting moss. We can meet up with Tanglekit on the way. We have a kit list in the General board already too, I think.
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Post by Goldenstar on Dec 20, 2007 21:24:08 GMT -5
OOC:// Great idea.
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Post by Autumnpool on Dec 21, 2007 19:16:30 GMT -5
OOC:// Thankyou. Umm.. should we et back to Rping, and then waiting for Iggy-san to FINALLY get back on? Of course, it's not her fault. She's been REALLY busy. Stupid English teacher.
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Post by Silverpelt on Dec 22, 2007 11:12:30 GMT -5
OCC:// Okay
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