Cloudystorm of IceClan

[shadow]

Name:Cloudy storm
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Lives:1
Appearance: Cloudystorm has a Jet black fur color that is silky to touch and has bright blue eyes that shine when it caches light. She has a pure a wight chest and pure wight paws.
Clan: Ice clan
Rank: Queen
Personality: Cloudy storm is kind, lovable, has a affectioned felling with kits, some times gets on you nerve, tough, and a quick learner.
History: Cloudystorm was abandoned as a kit and learned ti live on her own in the wild. She knows were every leaf has fallen and she has come across a few kits in her life. That is hoe she began to love kits and she produces good milk. Cloudystorm is also over protective when it comes to kits.
Mate/Crush: Any one who is willing
Mentor/Apprentice: not needed
Word verification: -Admin Edit-

[Torrentstar]

Denied. Why? I could go through this and pick out the errors but I won't. Let me just say, it needs a lot of work.

[Torrentstar]

There are ten errors in this Shadow. I cannot accept this. But read the rules and run your application through Spellcheck.

[shadow]

i Did run it throu spell check, in the rules i read it doent tell me hoe many sentances you are supost to be. but ok, ill try my hardes now

[Torrentstar]

The rules do mention it. They say at least 3 for physical description, personality, and history. I'm sorry, but it's impossible to understand what you're saying.

I'll beta-read for you, if you want me to.

[shadow]

ok, im sorry, did you read the other one i posted? it was called Nightapw?

[Torrentstar]

Yup, but there's already a Nightpaw. Read what I posted there.

Accepted! We have another queen!

[shadow]

Oh thank you Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!

[shadow]

Can i move her to light clan??

[Torrentstar]

No, because we have too many LightClan cats.